Thread: Emilie
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01-26-2008, 08:27 PM
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Join Date: Dec 2007
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Since this is not Model Mayhem, I will give a real critique

Pretty model, nice gaze at the camera.

The eyes look a bit dull, could use some catch light to brighten them up.

The lighting is a bit flat. Adding a bit of contrast would add some drama to the picture.

Take a look at the folds on her neck. They are from over stretching her neck for the pose. I would have turned her body at a 45 degree angle to the camera. That would have accomplished 2 things. First, it would have reduced the lines on the neck, and I would have also made her tummy look a bit flatter.

Over all, pretty good for not doing this for over 10 yrs.
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